by Scorpio_Six
With so much more to give.
What has happened?
Why is Emma so different?
Who was Bear and what was he doing?
A fascinating story with so much to tell.
I can't wait for the next EPISODE
Hot humping action. Interesting characters with a lot of intriguing clues about them dangled in front of us. Good stuff.
I predict an intervention from their uncle which solves the questions about A) The real reason the brothers are estranged, B) Why incest between immediate family isn't so unfamiliar, C) Who might be inheriting the uncle's wealth after the hints about The Will, and D) How the siblings can remain together. The only thing I'm still unclear about is how the biker(s) figure into the story line.
Still nice writing, and worth reading.
I read the first part with little interest but decided to read chapter 2 and I'm glad I did. This is now piquing my interest and I'm sure to read chapter 3. Good job, and thank you!
Hi Scorpio_Six, another very enjoyable read, keep up the good work, and will they ever meet their Uncle ? Will he be a decent guy, but just had a massive family fall-out in the past ? Do you see where this is going ?
Thank-you for your work.
This is a fantastic story, I hope they inherit there great Uncle's estate, and yes the natural beauty of the woods should stay intact!
Top story, always avoided this story in the past, sorry l did so now, it is well written, well paced, brilliant!!!
This build engages me. Scores 5/5