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Click here"No." Emma finishes buckling up her boots and grabs her leather jacket. "We need to know, especially now that our friends have been dragged into it." She looks at me. "He doesn't scare me," she says, and I can see the lie in her beautiful green eyes.
"Emma..."
My sister pulls on her jacket and zips it up like she's putting on armor. "You coming, Bro?"
I nod.
"Yeah, Sis. Of course I am."
We go outside and get onto Emma's bike. The streets are quiet and soon we're on the north road leading out of town, and passing the side road on the right that leads up to the Newley Institute. Then, a mile or so further up, we come to the other side road. Emma makes the turn, and for the first time in five years we take the long, narrow road that leads through the forest, all the way up to Wilderwood Hall.
This was a well thought out and fantastically written story. You can tell that the author (Scorpio_Six) put a lot of time and effort into plot development. I loved Jamie's use of sarcasm liberally spread throughout the story, similar to Nelson DeMille's style, only better, because there is less of it here.
Emma quit smoking!!! I'm so glad that you made that decision for her!!! The rest of this installment was very good 👍 but I would have given you a 5 star rating for Emma quitting smoking alone. Thanks!
I sincerely hope there are more than 12 chapters there is just so much to do here.
This is a brilliant story
5/5 again l wish l could give it more.
Great story so far. I look forward to the ensuing chapters. You have done a great job with developing and following the story line. Even better with character introduction and integration. I also love the fact that you have loving and caring love making in the story. Not slam bam sex that is derogatory or degrading. Again great job and I look forward to reading more of your work.