All Comments on 'Will She Accept the Challenge'

by NewNaughtyWriter

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boaman007boaman007almost 13 years ago
Great Story

Great story love the way you are building up, very creative. Can't wait for the next installment.

Manfred

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
well done so far ...

the title says it all, would like to see where you go with this.

sheransheranalmost 13 years ago
hiiiiiiiiiiiiii

niceeeeeeeeeeeee story keep this up and :) write more stories like thz

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
LOVE this story....

I can't wait to see where you go with this. Very well done so far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Can't wait for the next instalment

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Very nice - thank you.

I look forward to reading the next chapter - this promises to be an excellent story!

BordermanBordermanalmost 13 years ago
Cant Wait

Get Typing and expand to other places than the house please.

cutiegirl4004cutiegirl4004almost 13 years ago
loved it!

Makes me want to take off all of my clothes and stand outside by back door with the lights on!

sheransheranalmost 13 years ago
wow

awesm stuff >>>>>>>.badly wanna hear more

try other placez too like in a public toilet where she gets humiliated :)

NewNaughtyWriterNewNaughtyWriteralmost 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for the positive comments. This is my first attempt at writting any fiction and your comments are encouraging. I am working on the next installment as we speak

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
very sexy

I am looking forward to more of this, can't wait to see where this story goes. Sexy and very hot. Meow!

singlemalt8singlemalt8almost 13 years ago
Great Start

excellent for a first attempt please hurry and post more, the options are endless

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Leggings.....?

Well, realistic. Good writing...Mancelt.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Looking for the next part

Hopefully, you will be posting it soon :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
4 out of 5

very good - just a few misspellings or typos - but great story so far

maddictmaddictover 8 years ago
Anxiously....

Wanting another chapter, Please.

A common thought, our wives want us to be spontaneous and thoughtful.

I think this qualifies, however our house is not as private.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
What?

I won't tell you as i am thinking, only that i may never get to see what if anything you write or wrote as a finish to this story. Talk about a mean person.... gave you a low score for leaving me, (us) wondering , if.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
there is a way she could be covered

there is a way she could be covered, partly, and obey the instructions

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 6 years ago
Awesome!

Please keep this going its great

270498270498over 2 years ago

Oh my fucking God!!!! I just had a mini orgasm reading this. I really want my future husband to be so spontaneous and playful 😜. God!!! You need to keep writing such amazing stories. Totally worth reading. 5⭐

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110about 2 years ago

What fun couples can get up to? This is how couples keep the spark in their relationship. I loved it.

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