by jus8tine
thought and written premiere, jus :)
Please keep thinking and writing..................
This story reads as if you took your time and thought about most of the sensuality of it. I hope to see more from you.
I believe... You are one of the best Authors on Literotica... You wrote this story... with a Full understanding of Word fluency and Structure... And most importantly... You know how to make words sound erotic... I expect great things from you... and More stories...
Plus... I wanna know what happens to Susan... lol
One of the best stories I've read here..Will be going back and looking at more of your stories..This sounds like it could be the start of a very good series on this storyline..
Excellent what more can one say I just wonder if you will be able to keep up that good work.
I love how girls always control the sexual action with the photo guy.
Anytime you need a amatuer photographer in Colorado write me a line I have the perfect place picked out.
you teased me with the first teacher....and came through with the second. good job.
Jus*tine
This is building very nicely - looking forward very much to Chapter 2. Which way are you going - following Susan's modeling career? That would have nice possibilities.
The story was very nicely done and I would have to say that you're one of the best authors I've seen here on Literotica.
Porn stars don't turn me on. (Shaved pussy.) Why do you need a tripod? You using a 4x5 view camera? Dumb story.