by JukeboxEMCSA
Loved the concept. Loved the action. Loved the pleasure-giving and receiving. Thank you for a 5-star winner!
Thank you. I really enjoyed it, but was left feeling that it was unfinished. It seems like an outline of a great story, a tantalizing tease of something deeper. Your writing is wonderful, I just wanted more.
another jukebox hit. You're really good at this kinda stuff. Could I get some pointers?