by Reefkeeper
It's not bad but it would have been better with a rather more realistic scenario.
Everything went so smoothly - no angst, second thoughts
She seems unconcerned about registering for work as a prostitute, or that her performances would be recorded in commercial porn DVDs
A most interesting way for a girl to lose her virginity.
Her sexual awakening was wild to say the least, having sex with four men on the night she was deflowered without having any signs of pain or soreness.
A good story and a great read.
Reading this story had too many missing parts. The entire concept of the story was interesting and yet who would have to wait to nail his sister if she wanted to work in a window? Nevada brothels aren't close to those of Amsterdam, nor are the women. One only needs to watch (more than once is more than necessary) the video for the brothel shows to find perhaps one good looking female running around nakeddddd. The action by sis, that brother wanted to nail her to do the mattress shuffle dance from the time they were alone didn't provide for their getting it on. I knew from the get-go who was wearing the costume
There was one sentence devoted to losing her virginity. I could have used more. The setup was really good.