All Comments on 'Wings of Gray Ch. 01'

looks like this is going to be really cool! Very neat idea.

Way different and extremely cool! It's a nice beginning and can't wait for it to build up. Let me guess, Ethan's going to set Alex on fire? Oh god, I hope not....that'd be so mean! LOL.

Enjoyed it! Cool 2nd story! Cheers! (:

Nice start to the story. Definitely one if a kind. Lol Alexandra 36...bet you the roast happens on a Sunday.

I'll admit im kind of surprised how excited people are for this story haha. I do have a new editor and she edits a ton faster, ( i forgot to mention her and for that im rly sorry, THANKS MY FANTASTIC EDITOR!) the next one has been submitted for a couple days so it should be up tomorrow. Enjoy :)

I'm loving this creative twist on the world and watching how your characters deal with the changes. Your character feel real and I can hear them speak. Nice!

Very excited to see where this story goes! so much potential! I am anxious to see all the twists and turns that i know are coming. Cheers :D

I love the originality of this so far :D Looking forward to reading more from you!

I love your ideas. They're original and add something new.

finally a story with orignal ideas!!! don't get those very often these days..love it!!

loved it

i read the first paragraph, and was instantly hooked!

I like what your doing so far ;)

You are a good writer, Keep up the good job.

Please, before anything else, make sure you get YOUR and YOU'RE correct. It's incredibly frustrating trying to read a story where these are swopped around. YOUR means "belonging to you" - the same way OUR means "belonging to us". YOU'RE means "you are", the same way WE'RE means "we are". The apostrophe stands in the place of missing letters (or even words, in some cases). If you're American, you may pronounce YOU'RE as YOUR, but that does NOT mean you spell it that way!

The real question is, how did Ethan notice before Mike?😂