by SarahHawke
This started off annoying, then quickly became extremely cool. Looking forward to the next installment.
You managed to pull me into this story and fuel my imagination. at some points i thought of certain scifi movies and universes but never had the feeling that you were not building your own world. well done and thanks for this good piece of writing. really looking forward to the next chapter. off to read your other stories now :)
I decided to take a look at your bio and found that this entire series is sold as an ebook. Does that mean this is simply a teaser chapter in an effort to raise sales?