All Comments on 'Winners and Losers'

Serious cum.material!

Absolutly great!

Love this story nice build up.

Good luck on the contest

Five stars and favorited!

Mom sounds like a honey

This story could have some more added to it. Please let me know what you think. Thanks.

OMG.

Please tell me there's a Chapter 2 in the works! :)

Loser?........NOT.

Great fantasy

Ed

we should continue the story, it was nice

If that’s a loser sign me up

Could use a couple more chapters to add to an amazing story. What happened to the football player? How will Prinn respond the next time they cross paths at school? Etc. Etc.

Please add more to this great story.

I wrote this story as a one off for the Halloween contest. I have too many more ideas to write before I come back to this one. But Xmas is coming. Thanks everyone.

My Wife & I just don't like Halloween, ever. When I saw that the story description mentioned Halloween I was turned off. But since I really liked all your other stories, I decided to give it a shot. OMG What a delight!! I'm looking forward to Halloween 2020 now !! Thank you. Please keep writing, you have a gift for telling really erotic stories. [I refuse to call them porn]

I am pleased to know you and your wife enjoy my stories. My late wife and I enjoyed reading stories together as well. I'm also glad you had enough confidence in my writing to give a story you thought would be awful a try. Maybe you won't have to wait until next Halloween, Xmas will soon be upon us. Thanks for reaching out.

Well the only trick here,was the asshole football player.

Looks like every one else got the treats, and loser

became the big winner. Good read,well done.

...THANK YOU...

Didn't see that coming, the mom and cheerleader bit. Good work.

I'd love to see another chapter and a love story. A marriage to Prinn and Mom moving in with them getting both women pregnant on purpose.

OMG! I almost came just reading it!

Great ad fun story!

Loved it. Thanks.

Greeeat story!

10/10!!!!!

Good story!!!!!! Keep writing.

Great!!-- except for the mother's plastic tits. Fake tits feel like lumpy shit-- not the

soft smoothness of REAL boobs.

Awesome mom son story

Oh yeah. Great story line, and I even liked the part where he punched out the jock