All Comments on 'Winning Hand!!!'

Your grasp of English grammar is so poor that reading your story was very dificult. Work on it

Yeah, yeah, I know there are poltroons out there that figure as long as you have the words cock, pussy and fuck in a sentence then they can pop wood. But that doesn't constitute writing. This was so poorly written I don't even know where to begin. You mixed tenses, plural vs. possessives, capitalizations: the list goes on. It was short and not even exciting.

If you plan on posting do us all a favor and at least TRY to put the words in correct order. Othewise, don't even bother. Grammar counts, education counts.

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Now the cuck pimp is looking for bbc for his whore.