All Comments on 'Winning the Olympian Ch. 01'

Loved that little tale. Looking forward to see how things develop. Terrific start. Keep em cumming~

is this a remake of an old story? I'm sure I've read this before, but it shows up as new....

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Great story, but not a new one. I've read this years ago. Has it changed?

This has definitely been published before, hopefully by this author. It is a good story, one of the better ones, but not amazing.

Fun story, but I cant stand when people write erotic literature like it is porn that people don't like.

What makes bad porn, bad porn, is that the people don't act real during sex. And a woman screaming "Oooooooh ooooooooh Jason!!!!!!" the whole time is simply not realistic. Some women out there may do that, but that's probably because all their first sexual experiences likely involved watching porn, and that put expectations on them.

This was however a good effort at writing something erotic. 3/5 from me.