by ShadowThought
it remin ded me of a visit from my aunt,cousin and grandaughter.what a wonderful time.
WOW! Not often that you hear about an Army clerk, with, of course, a nine inch dick. Lucky that he drove on shitty roads and Aunty was on the way. Phew. So lucky to get out of Germany unharmed. Phew.
Very well written. Never mind the negs - there are always one or two who're not on your wavelength. 5 stars and I look forward to your next
Great story for your first. Will u continue it?
I hope so. Or, write something longer and better
5/5.
Sorry to be 'that guy's, but, the word is TAUT not taunt. A taunt is a teasing insulting remark. I don't know if this is a spell check problem or if it's a 'suggested by Siri /Google ' word but it's a pretty common mis-use. Also, past tense of search is sought, like bought and fought. English is quirky, oh well.
Good stroke story, had enough build up to make it plausible.
Anyone who doesn't think 9's exist hasn't looked at much porn. Uncommon, yes, but so are natural 38 d's.
Good first effort, keep'em coming.