All Comments on 'Winter Night with Aunt Cindy'

by ShadowThought

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A pleasure to read a well-written first story. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

it remin ded me of a visit from my aunt,cousin and grandaughter.what a wonderful time.

RedMerlotRedMerlotover 2 years ago

WOW! Not often that you hear about an Army clerk, with, of course, a nine inch dick. Lucky that he drove on shitty roads and Aunty was on the way. Phew. So lucky to get out of Germany unharmed. Phew.

OdiouserOdiouserover 2 years ago

VERY promising first effort. Welcome aboard, keep 'em coming.

HargaHargaover 2 years ago

Great story, well written and easy to read.

phobosukphobosukover 2 years ago

Very well written. Never mind the negs - there are always one or two who're not on your wavelength. 5 stars and I look forward to your next

WargamerWargamerover 2 years ago

Great story for your first. Will u continue it?

I hope so. Or, write something longer and better

5/5.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

stopped reading at9 inches...geezus

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ok story,, shame his dick went from nearly 9 inches to 8 inches.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 2 years ago

Loved it. Want more.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sorry to be 'that guy's, but, the word is TAUT not taunt. A taunt is a teasing insulting remark. I don't know if this is a spell check problem or if it's a 'suggested by Siri /Google ' word but it's a pretty common mis-use. Also, past tense of search is sought, like bought and fought. English is quirky, oh well.

Good stroke story, had enough build up to make it plausible.

Anyone who doesn't think 9's exist hasn't looked at much porn. Uncommon, yes, but so are natural 38 d's.

Good first effort, keep'em coming.

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Shadowthought is an older man, actor, writer and Pacific NW native that harbors a dark side, a slew of secrets and kinks. His story-telling expertise, listening skills, improv training and imagination make him an exciting RP partner to explore fantasies and desires with. He'...