All Comments on 'Winter Retreat'

Interesting concept. So far you are holding my interest ,and further possibilitys are intreging.

I have to say, the idea of owning a girl and her sister is a giant turn on. I love the story, and would love to see it continued.

you have great writing skill and i loved every part of this!

reviled in it (revelled)

SUCKED my COCK dry, that makes you a COCKSUCKER, we both know you are a COCKSUCKER. In fact you're my COCKSUCKER; you'll do what I say. You're to be my COCKSUCKING slave and I'm your new master. You're going to SUCK my COCK (DOES SHE SUCK COCK????)

as secluded as it could be (MEANINGLESS AND UNNECESSARY????)

handy work (handiwork)

Sis (sis) (3)

ass hole (asshole)

cut-cunt (cut cunt)

transposing herself into (imagining) (in)

Sometimes (sometimes)

it's definition (its)