by beast5
What an imaginative concept, and quite well-written. I only hope that YOU don't have the technical skills to actually carry this out!
Whatever this was erotic is not a word which describes it.
Maybe i should have given it a 1.5 - not possible, unfortunately The writing was bad - passable - but the story totally a turn-off to all except those with severe psychological problems
Nice story and I loved the other 1 of beta tester hope u will come up more stories soon
Would love to see a part two of this with the girl being controlled by the implant