All Comments on 'Winterborn'

I am very curious what other stories you have in your mind to show.

i liked your beginning vary much and iam looking forward to the next parts of the story so many questions i would love too see answered

You know I loved this. It's very hard hitting, sadness coming out of triumph.

You have the talent to write and I was lucky to get the first read at this. I look forward to reading more of your work :-)

Lots of backstory and outcomes to discover. I hope you keep writing and keep posting.

Congratulations on your well deserved comments so far, you did the hard work I just tweaked a little. Looking forward to your other works.

I will look forward to your filling out of the story arc. It reminds me a bit of Babylon 5 story arc.

was a very entertaining and interesting story looking foward to future post from you thank you and have a happy new year

This isn't my usual cup of tea but damn... it has me really interested. I want to know everything, who is he exactly, what is his past, what are they (the enemies) and everything else in between.

Fantastic work and I can't wait to read more.

was on my to read list for a while now.

i'm intrigued, i like the the use of elves and orc and names like centauri, maybe because i'm a gamer and avid watchers of series like babylon 5 and anything alike. a lot of the used terms come across as familiar for me (whether or not you based them on something that's already out there)

i really would like to find out more. only advice i'd give is if this will contain several stories to either publish them here all or not at all. i think me, as reader, would feel a bit cheated if i was only able to read book 1/3/5 while book 2/4 won't be published here. if you know what i mean?

The way you have this ending it sounds a little too much like Elves had a LOT of "influance" shall we say in the war. Interested in if you're going to go anywhere with this.

This was an enjoyable tale although I think it suffered somewhat from being a story set in amidst a much larger saga. You’re creating and cramming mythology in there to the point where the introduction reads a lot like a history textbook. Now, don’t get me wrong here, I wish my history textbooks in high school featured elves and orcs because they’d be twenty times as interesting. I also like the idea of traditionally sword and sorcery associated creatures in a sci-fi setting. The problem is that the story doesn’t have much room to breathe and let the reader digest all the information you’re putting across.

That being said, I liked this and your writing talent alone certainly stands on its own merits. I’d like to see what you can do with a longer story arc. Good luck and keep up the good work!

Very well written. Good story, sad plot devices but good none-the-less. Interesting to see where the erotic components will bloom from: When/if you get to them xD

is this all ya got?

The song is by the Cruxshadows name is Winterborn