All Comments on 'Wish Fulfilment'

That was a pretty good story. It had enough back story so the characters weren't flat, and got into the action so it wasn't dragging. It has a good amount of tryst and story to make it a good story as well as erotica which is personally my favorite kind of story on here, good job.

"I shall have my revenge, mortal...and I packed you pastrami and cheese."

Genius!

But this hoy says that he's not going to hurt any, he degrade two women right off the bat. That was it for me.

Nice twist, cool "parody" on the MC genre, and characters were amusing. Mercy is the best ex-Succubus I've ever read.

To the @Sorry comment, well it was a dream...and not at all as bad as can happen in the MC genre. I think being in SciFi/Fantasy...you don't see it as much, so being in this category might have not been as appropriate. *shrug* I still thought it was novel and interesting.

Enjoyed the 'missionary position for the sole purpose of procreation' line /b/ro

That was fucking adorable, I love it!

The Ending was the best, IMO.

...and a minivan. She remains a creature of Hell-- it's just a different hell.

Came to get off to hot succubus mind control action, stayed for the humor! Killed my masturbation session, but I laughed too hard to care.

This is very well written. I had already cum reading another of your stories but finished this one anyways. Highest compliment!

With a poke in the eye for the mind control genre. Too funny. And the ultimate kinkster's fantasy - missionary position for the sole purpose of procreation.

honestly I loved the twisting of the mind control conventions. 10/10

That was a lot more fun than I expected. And a happy ending, to boot! Nicely done!

Wow, I really didn't see that coming, what a cute ending!