All Comments on 'Wish Granted'

Liked the story. Hope to see more by you

Good story. The kind of story I like to read.

5 starts all the way.

I wasn't sure what to make of this in the beginning, but you quickly proved it a worth-while read. Great job.

Liked it could have been a tad longer but a great read

reminds me of a pulp story I read once. I loved that one too.

On the jinn/genie story plot. I liked the direction you took. I hope you revisit this story later; I could see you writing other types of stories with these characters behind the scenes. Write the story about the women who lost over half her body weight, or a LW story, BDSM, incest, lesbian, gay, romance, erotic coupling, or group or whatever story. Just use these characters in the back ground to help the story along and keep it entertaining.

Thank you,

DB

I loved it toooo much!!

The quality of this story, as with all your stories, shows the hard work you put into it. Thanks from a grateful reader.

awseome

Nicely done! Amazing!

Superb, as usual.

John

Loved the story. It is a novel idea.

Even when you have great power you can use it to make life better for others and still have a satisfying life yourself.

frickin amazing

I have tears in my eyes and I'm still laughing.

Well done.

This had the makings of an epic story.. easily continued... the possibilities /sigh

Just read this for the third time. Still one of the best short stories on the site.

Be carful what you wish for was my first thought. I didn't get the wishing rules at first, thanks for the show and tell. A good condition on being young we were so dumb then.

I wish I had a FPB trawler and the income to pay to moor and maintain it, forever ;-)

Clever tale