All Comments on 'Wish to Faq My Aunty'

by hari459

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
grammatical MESS

use proper grammar for fucks sake... if you cant speak english dont post.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Idiotic in it's every aspect

Learn some english

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
FORGET WRITING STORIES

STOP THIS TORTURE.i FEEL VIOLATED AFTER READING YOUR STORY.DO SOMETHING ELSE IN YOUR SPARE TIME AND LEAVE US ALONE.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Good Effort!

I think that you have made a fantastic effort in writing this story. Your English is better than my Hindi will ever be. Ok so it isn't perfect but I was able to understand the plot and if you keep writing and reading in English it will get better. As for the story I found it hot. Keep up the practice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
good effort

i certainly would like to encourage this effort.

your story was excellent....enjoyed it very much.

But do use the incentive to be able to post good stories as a reason to improve your english !!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
learn english and how to spell idiot

learn how to spell in english..... your story makes no sense and its hard to understand.. your story was tha hardest storie too read and was dumb..

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
improve english

lol lol lol da english was da best i've ever read

bigshotinthebushbigshotinthebushover 16 years ago
What a poor effort!

If that passes off as a story, I really wonder about Literotica's diving standards. No punctuation, a weak construction and an abysmal story line - what more do you want? Can't the editors find anything better?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
horrendous

if you can't write properly you shouldn't post, period.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
sexy

I loved it. I got the point, even if it wasn't "in English".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
sonof a bitch

u mother fucker learn english

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
SUCKS !!!!

Ass! You cant write for nuts. just stop writing. its such a torture. and u call that english????

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Petrified

i am petrified of what u are going to write next!!! :-(

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
full of shit

you are full of shit you aint 9 inches and you never lasted 1:45. your story telling sucks you sound like you stole about 7 other stories and bastardized them all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
why correct english for fuck?

stori teling needs no languej lesons nor speling either. it is the fancy erotica to harden the kok that is enuf.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Forget the English( Which Sucks)

Forget the english, this piece of shit posted is absolutely useless. Hari459 u r an ASSHOLE.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Stomach toucher

whi did u hav 2 tuch her stomak? it is funny wht tarns sum peopl on.

dude, first thing you need to learn is english before using sick expressions.

Sorry but thumbs down to this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Poor Imagination

Pathetic imagination of a kid who has to learn a lot about sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
low life story

full of gramatical mistakes, improve ur english dude.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
this submission is a disgrace to literotica

wow im ammazed this is all supposed to be fiction but at least make it seem real my 5 year ol can come up with a better story than this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
stupidest shittiest faggot

get some life you faqhead...you are one dumb son of a bitch,,,

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
gandu madrasi

saalae madrasi kyo India ki beizzati kara raha hai.ja kae maa chuda maderchod.

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