by _Lynn_
A nice way to bring the Earth god to please her.
A slap to people who say that character can't be rich in a short story.
So beautiful, so sensitive, so real! You write so well...I envy you!
such lovely atmosphere. Very good writing and a lovely piece.
Strong imagery, spun around an interesting idea. Well done, and good luck in the contest.
Almost could have gone into first time *grin* I loved this idea. Nicely told!
Selena
Nicely written! It adds whole new levels to getting dirty....
and a wonderful story. Rich in imagery and sensuality. Great job, Lynn. Good luck in the contest.
your mind is as fertile as the soil keep up the good work lynn
That sure was different. I think I'll go lay out in the yard for awhile and see if I get lucky. Good read Miss Lynn. Good luck in the competition.
DG
A short but great piece. Good pacing, sympathetic character/situation, nice narrative style and an intriguing story line - a wonderful Earth Day submission. I'll keep an eye out for your other stuff.
and eerie all at once. A very enjoyable read, and a likable main character.