All Comments on 'Witch of the Wild Woods Ch. 06'

Hang on, they already meet Jude last chapter! Only it was a family of raccoons not skunks... the writing is lovely, but the continuity should not be this patchy so early in the story. Come to think of it, they're was one earlier too - the girl Lane was not yet formally boyfriend/girlfriend with in the first chapter suddenly became a 2 year relationship in the second. Details like this make it quite difficult to follow the story.