by CAP811
story, and, you can write. pulled me in immediately and carried me all the way to the end. just loved it. your fan always, wetapap
What a super story! They don't make movies like they used to. Or do they?
See you at the movies.
Boyd
What a lovely story. I had to google Troy Donahue to find out what he looked like. I found out he was an 'older' actor. lol A.T. I knew already, she has this elfin-like quality. Keep writing! I'll check out more of your stories.
Not really my kind of story. It was well written but I just didn’t care for the storyline itself. “Troy” came across, to me, as some kind of a mentally disturbed social misfit. I certainly didn’t feel any ‘romance’ in it. I realize that I’m in the minority here with my opinion, but oh, well, I don’t like chocolate ice cream either.