All Comments on 'Without You I Have Nothing Ch. 02'

by JAScooter

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EmmSeaEmmSeaover 16 years ago
Bravo!!

I found part two was as enjoyable as part one. I'm going to enjoy learning about Peter's past, and seeing how Peter and Jennifer's relationship progresses. Well done and thankyou!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very promising

I'm interested in the characters and that is a good way to start a read. Will enjoy following them along the path you lead them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Colourful

This is the most colourful story I've read for a long time. Keep it up.

Coolati_GeorgeCoolati_Georgeover 16 years ago
Off to the trots eh?

Goodness JA don't tell me you notice a revealing neckline - you know we Aussies would never admit to such a thing.

A few from my squadron played up no end at a casino one night and were tossed out so I know why Jennifer held you in check.

She's no stupid lady that one.

Keep it coming

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