All Comments on 'Without You I Have Nothing Ch. 14'

Nice recovery on the story. I still think he should have run far away from her and found a more stable person.

I think the story is a good base story but they are both a little prone to flying off the handle to easily I think. I think that your story is very good and holds attention well and should make for a fine looooooooong novella

I happen to look forward to reading each new chapter. I also know several couples who are prone to fly off the handle and then have to work really hard to repair the damage and get back on track. The fellow that is dating my sister definitely would fit right in with these people in the story. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

And I am sure that I will continue to follow it to the end which may appear fairly soon unless Pete is called back to Malaysia to clean out another nest of varmints!

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To be consistent I must continue my complaints about the personagem Jennifer. She has to be one of the most self-centered people I have heard about. The guy almost gets

killed saving her from rape and murder, and she walks away without even saying thank you because she sees another woman with him?? How come that does not make her jealous and competitive enough to come over and jump on top of him?

I was sure that her brother would demonstrate good sense and talk her out of fleeing the scene to Melbourne, but apparently he is not the dominant member of the pair.

Oh well, we just have to see what tomorrow brings!

Flies like a lead brick

After the last chapter, virtualy taken from 'the bold and the beautful', I almost gave up on this story. This chapter is much better, with a believable story line. Please don't back slide.

14 Chapters of this is 15 chapters too much. Stay off your mom's computer and pay more attention in class, especially English composition. Your plot and characters are straight out the rejected episodes of Days of our lives

Here it is. I found chapter 13 wrongly posted in reviews and essays. Delete and re-submit this chapter is the only way to get the complete boxed set together. Chapter 13 page is... http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.p hp?id=336528