All Comments on 'Without You I Have Nothing Ch. 31'

to where it should be.

Well J.A., what have we one more night? As ever I have been here and will make it too the end! Except for the evil torture inflicted on the women, I loved every word! Will the phrophets other predictions come true also? And will you write them for us too, I hope. I never get tired of goodness overwhelming evil. I wish more of it would occur in our "real" world!........Richard

This was sort of ritualistic, a public summon for charges and a trial by the victims, but death is too quick for the atrocities these villains have committed. Maybe I'm bloodthirsty, but I'd want them to pay for the rest of their lives, the same way they tried to enslave and torture the victims they had kidnapped.

We have the freedom to write what we like here but seriously those who are still writing bad comments this far into the story I have to ask while are you still reading it? JA besides the torture to Jennifer I have liked this story all the way and I hope it still keeps going. This is a well written piece of work and I'm sure a publisher would snap it up. Keep up the excellent work and to those who don't like the story go read something else. This site has a enough stories on it to cater to everyones needs and desires so shove off!!