All Comments on 'Witness Ch. 01'

Another one I will eagerly wait for the next installment lol.

Miss Kira Bangkok

very interesting twist, good storyline, and characters.

OK, another great start. But . . .

Everything in the story indicates that it’s set in the 70’s: the slang, the names of the black guys, everyone smoking in a public building, the fashion, the low, low prices for sex, etc.

So how is Poppy’s photo going to end up in a college meme???

Loving it anyway, but the opening “meme” set an obviously wrong time period.

Thank you, another lovely start to what I am sure will be a great story I am looking forward to the next instalment thank you again, I just love your work.

@ Rapier: What Poppy actually says is "I'm going to end up a meme on a college frat house wall," which implies nothing about the internet, it implies her picture will be pinned to a frat house wall. She is well educated and using the word 'meme' is not beyond her vocabulary:

<b>MEME ORIGIN</b>

1970s: from Greek mimēma ‘that which is imitated’, on the pattern of gene. A meme is an idea, behavior, or style that becomes a fad and spreads by means of imitation from person to person within a culture and often carries symbolic meaning representing a particular phenomenon or theme.