All Comments on 'Witnessing'

What a marvelous story! You handle the visit and where it goes so well. Such marvelous descriptions of the people and the activities.

I lived in an area that got many visits from them. Shaking my head, remembering calling a neighbor when seeing two at her door, so she had an excuse to get away from them.

Thank you for putting the tale here, and for letting us know it was published.

*chuckling to myself* Only RedHairedandFriendly could take such an innocent (and in it's own way, TRUE) story, and fashion a hot 3-some out of it!! God, D...I should have been HALF as lucky as Deak! Thanks for telling my tale, and for making it soooooo exciting! B

DC:

I wish I had your sense of humor and your ability to take a situation, make it humorous, and inject great sex into it. you've got another winner. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Simply the best I have read in ages, I came twice, and am hard again! Kudos to your editor, and to your imagination! I have secretly lusted after the ladies that come door to door occasionally, and I did canvassing for a fund-raiser just out of high school. At least once a week a woman (or even a man) would come to the door in a towel, string bikini, semi-transparent leotard, or even nude, and it would make my day! I would tell the other canvassers in my crew, and I could tell that it had an effect on them too... keep up the good writing! Thanks, cascadecock

Good job! I loved it. Nicest slow burn orgasm I've had in a while. :) Thanks for writing it.

now for the saving of us all. TK U MLJ LV NV good job RH&F a satiristic parody.

I am getting the seed of an idea from having read this.

I'm just kidding! It was a really great little tale (no pun intended) and I thank you for having shared it with us. It was definitely a Five Star story!

Deak should have taken the opportunity to thoroughly lick, suck and tongue fuck Mandys little puckered tail hole before he sodomized her. That would have been spectacular. The story was very entertaining and erotic. 5 stars.

HOT!

How charming Deak saved Mandy's cherry for someone else.

MY GOODNESSM WHERES THE NEXT PART, IM SOAKING