All Comments on 'Wizard Ch. 11'

Every time I log on to Literotica I am hoping that you have posted another chapter. This one of best written and interesting stories I have seen on this site. Thank you.

Excellent once again, thank you for sharing your writing gift with us. Your imagination is wonderful as is your ability to communicate.

Most excellent! A new chapter.

It’s good reading can’t wait for more

This yarn is quite gripping and enjoyable well done.

Another exciting and well written chapter. I appreciate the fact that John isn’t always trusted or always right but has to prove himself constantly. The characters you have added along the way have been well thought out and their skills compliment each other as it should be in a group. I have been thrilled with this story since the beginning and you haven’t disappointed me in the slightest. I look forward to your return.

Have a great vacation and stay safe.

J.D.

Well written. Good development and plot pacing. Keep it up.

Thanks for the story so far. I appreciate the time and work you put into your writing.

I came across chapter 4 had to go back to the beginning and real for a few day to catch up. This is an amazing story and much appreciated. Please do not let the whiners slow you down or speed you up. This is your tale and and as such you need to tell it at your own pace. Thank you for sharing with all of us. those who complain about the chapter size or timing are probably just expressing a need to see more of it (poorly) . 5 start for every chapter . Enjoy your break and come back full of new ideas.

Exciting, hard to put down with all the twists and turns. Glad I’m not working, more time to follow the wizard and his friends.

Love these interconnected stories. Well done!