All Comments on 'Wizard Ch. 15'

Hmm. Very short and in need of at least one more editing pass. I enjoy the story, but always feel like it could be *more.*

Does make you wonder about what other things she thinks she "shouldn't be able to do". If it eventually goes there, I do wonder if a goddess wouldn't be curious about of succubae's touch, indirectly through vessels but at their power levels, real all the same. ^.^ ~Idle musings.

Thank you very much for your story. Eagerly awaiting the continuation. Nice play with the dragonkin, I didn't see it until around the time he had figured it out myself. Was going a weird chimera / mad mage route, but this makes more sense, and is far more interesting. You and yours Be well.

I agree with ANON it could be more; but what we have is pretty damn good. Thank you for sharing with us. We all appreciate the effort put into this tale. 5 stars again.

Love these stories, but if you're using the Lit app, this and the next come up with only about 2 sentences in the chapter.

Also unfortunately while you can rate on the app, you can't comment. 😥

I think it's the hyperlinks in the story that confuse the Lit app.