All Comments on 'Efrain and Cory Ch. 06'

The story is good and I can't stop reading it. I look forward to each CHAPTER COMING OUT. I had a time trying to follow this chapter, but when I reread the others, it made a better sense to me. Please keep writing for I want NO I NEED to know what happens next.

ACLASSYLADY

Hi I love your story but please do not introduce any more characters or bring any back sometimes it's just cool to mention someone being cute like the TA without making him a subplot. Also it also seems you are straying from your original narrative, may be not but will keep trying....

I completely disagree that there are too many characters. You are weaving a really great story with interesting sub plots. You obviously have a much larger story in the works. I hope we are treated to reading it.

Can't figure out why anyone wouldn't like the TA story tucked in. Sounds cute to me:)

It gets confusing, trying to figure out who is doing/saying what when. Maybe I missed it, but what is a TA?

I have seen some writers specify, and it really helps, when you might see "Cory:" you know this is Cory's POV or "Indie:" that would be Indie's POV. Oh well, I'm into this thing now, no turning back.

As far as I've seen its commonly two things, teacher advisor, or teacher assistent. Its the second here.