All Comments on 'Efrain and Cory Ch. 07'

Just had to take pity on you Dayne... Handling those voices can be a challenge and a giggle. No way for total control but hey, they could come to a 'meeting of the minds'. (Kind of sounds like two of them already did with the story pitch!)

Why did it not click that Indie would be Efrain's roommate - the irony!!

Please do the paranormal erotica thing! You would blow Twilight and the like out of the water.