All Comments on 'Wolf's Assassin'

Great Start!! Can't wait to see whats next.

You are going to have to brush up on your spelling and proof reading. Although, the story itself is not bad.

Didn't really care for the beginning at all but the rest shows promise... please proof read... a lot of misspelling but I'm sure you will get past this... Good luck ;^)

A very interesting story. I look forward to seeing what you do with it. I like it alot so far. Keep writing.

If this is your first attempt I can't wait for more, because I believe they will just get better. Hope to see more posts soon.

that was such a freakin rush!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.

For being your first time writing this story is great. Looking forward to more of this story.

Very good start. First not a clue as what sex the assassin is. The the pack. Curious to where it shall lead with the assassing now in their clutches. Please continue.

More, please.

more more more, we want more

you definitely suck at telling it. I can see that there is a great story in your mind, but I really doubt you have the gift to write it down. It seems more like an enumeration of acts, there is no natural flow. Dialogues are clunky, no one talks like that.

I would have refrained from the prologue, her history is just too unbelievable. I mean, the story is fictional with werewolves and all, but that's okay, because the category is nun-human. But with the adduction and the temple raising and the murder of her parents, that's just too much. You're overdoing it.

Anyway, I would like to read more, because I know, that it's gonna be a good story as soon as you learn to tell it.

The story was good, interesting. But I agree with the comment below mine. You definitely need to proofread or get an editor. You show promise. I'll be coming back for more.

Please Please write MORE MORE you have me wanting to read more and more

i like your story. i'm just waitting for you to write more.

i hope you continue this story. i would love to hear more

Are we ever going to hear the rest of the story?

Waiting forever! Must know what would happen next!

Very well written and story is great. As the title says, More Please! XD

more more more more more <-----<<< thats the chat going through my head more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz/???????????????????/

This is such a great start, where have you gone? Please please please please please please please please please please please please finish!

OMG CLIFFHANGER please finish it it is so good. Can't wait for what alex might do to scarlet.

please continue. Don't stop, finish the story it was good

Holy shit!!! Where's the next chapter you have never ready to stop whatever I'm doing and continue reading!!

This is a great story, really hoping you'll continue!

Pls continue