All Comments on 'Wolf's Girl Ch. 02'

Thank you for finishing this. Lovely story. :) I especially liked how Ryan turned out not to be a dumbhead jerk. I also loved how strong McKenzie turned out to be. Way to go.

So many writers make the easy choices, take the easy way out. Thank you for not doing that. :)

Like Ellienora35, I love what you did with Ryan. I was so sure I knew where you were going with him, until after Giles woke up dangling from a tree. Well done, there!

LOVE Mack. WANT Giles.

Can't wait to read whatever you come up with next!

Excellent story! Not a big fan of fantasy stories but yours won me over. Thank you for the pleasurable read. jntiques

i am so glad you finished this story.. so many writer whoss out and just drop theirs. i loved the way you ended this one . no stupid needless alpha meanes or challenges. please write more soon...trs

Please keep writing...great story, funny, heart warming the whole package

Well written and enjoyable from start to finish.

I much enjoyed this. I will look forward to your next...

Ellienora35: So glad you enjoyed how the conflict with Ryan turned out. I was worried people wouldn't go for that angle. Thank you for reading and taking time to leave a comment, even though you didn't read it here first. :)

EverLux: Yay! Mutual Fan Club :D

Anon1: You're welcome! Thank you for the comment! Winning someone over is the best compliment. People seem to dig Ryan. I may have to revisit that character.

Anon2: If I ever don't finish a story, it's because I'm dead. I'm so serious.

Anon3 & 4: Thank you!!!

SisterRobin: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I notice you have some werewolf stuff too. Which is great, because I was looking for something to

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Oops. Clicked too soon. That should have said "looking for something to read".

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! This is the best story I've read on here so far.

I enjoyed this two part series! Very well thought out, with well fleshed out characters, and well written! I loved Max and Guile. And Ryan not being a bad guy but actually someone who really cares about his pack like an alpha should, was great, too! Please keep up your amazing works!

This story was AMAZING! I'd love to read a longer werewolf story *hint* *hint*~FabledxDream

Anon1: Aww! Thank you!

Anon2: Another Ryan fan! I may have to give this character more thought. Thank you. :)

FabledxDream: I'm thinking about it! I have three other ideas. No wait, four. Michael's story (the mysterious one at the pack meeting), an unrelated pack story about some not so nice werewolves, Miranda's story, and a prequel with Ryan. Thank you for the nice comments!

I have read many stories and novellas on this site and I must say, this is one of the best! Well set storyline, engaging plot, not just a constant sex scene. It makes for an engrossing read with wit, and characters that catch a readers attention without overselling it. Well done!

I really like this story. Not just sex scene after sex scene and not violent, also not a run of the mil typical love story. It had depth, the characters were likeable and relateable. I feel all their inner struggles......great read. Thanks

This was so good. I feel all the happiness in my chest and I love the light, happy ending. This was really good for this site but I feel like it could truly shine as a fleshed out in depth story on Wattpad. Don't stop writing because you definitely have talent and in the world of people who love werewolf stories this one is magnificent.

I really enjoy your writing, and can't wait for your next story.

THANK YOUTHANK YOU THANK YOU!.!! You are ONE author that seems to have it correct!.! Your eyes can SHUTTER,as that means to CLOSE. your body SHUDDERS,as that means to SHAKE. TAUGHT is the past tense of TEACH,TAUT means to TIGHTEN. 95% of authors AND editors on this site get those wrong!!! You used them both correctly!!! I was a bit disappointed in Giles,however. He seemed like a shitty alpha and kind of a puss. I did enjoy Ryan!! I was prepared to dislike him,then that interaction did not go the way I thought it would!! I love a good HEA,thanks for your submission!!! :-) 4 stars!!('Cuz Giles is a puss! LOL)

Really enjoyed reading your story! I loved the dynamics between Giles and Carson Giles and Ryan. Plus the main couple of course was so hot I love sneaking around element just makes it feel more intimate and thrilling to me. I hope you are inspired again soon to write /post something as this was bloody brilliant. Super sexy and hot but deep emotions too. You got me hooked

~Rain

Oh crap, I came to this for the erotica, not to find myself wiping away the tears. Lovely story, great characters, a fantastic imagination and an easy writing style. Thank you.

A very appealing story. The writing is excellent, the characters draw the reader in as you, the reader, root for them. The love story is solid and the sex is compelling (not to mention hot, hot, and still hotter).

With that said, I have to add, 'Miss Olivia, please consider writing MORE!'

Can totally see this being made into a wonderful movie under the right filmmaker!

Everything was perfect. I thought Ryan would be a negative character. But turns out he is a good one. But still have my doubts because of the way he claimed power and threatened to punish Mack. Nevertheless an absolute delight reading it!

Please,please,please keep writing. I will buy all your stories if I have to. I loved this story. The plot flowed well, the characters were perfectly developed, and a hundred other things I don’t have time to name. I will pray the gods look down favorably on you and any future endeavors. Thank you for a wonderful reading adventure 🙏🏻

Good story overall, a real pity the author doesn't look to be active :(

confusing as hell. my 82 year old brain couldn't keep up with the androgynous names. no point to it, just confusion...