All Comments on 'Wolvren Ch. 04'

Keean is taking this all shockingly well, considering he appears to be in an alternate universe or has gone back in time. Why? It’s got to be more than just, “we’re mates.” He seems smarter and more curious than that. What about how he got there?

Keean is awesome. He seems to have an awesome personality, i think his experience with the wolf pack is what is making everything with Dax easy to handle. I cant wait to read the next chapter and get the know Keean more!

Thank you for the feedback. Like I mentioned in Chapter 2, this is a long story with a long buildup. All constructive criticism is noted. Chapters 5 to 7 are already completed, awaiting my proofreader. Thank you for your patience.

Feedback is good, but write your story. It’s really good! Can’t wait for the rest!

Please finish