by lexstroker
Loved it. I love be the plot and writing was great. It flowed really good. It was such an enjoyable read. Is there more about their lives and how they work towards being together?
Nice! I love how you wove us through the story, lulling us into thinking we knew where it was going, then a twist to make us wonder. I really enjoyed it.
I like the story line and how the characters developed. At some point I thought they weren't going to make it but am glad they pulled through. It's a very nice short story. Definitely a 5 star.
Good story. Good pace. Even the passing of time after Kate distanced herself is paced incredibly well. Could have been a few sentences longer, MAYBE. But otherwise I am so looking forward to part 2
A gorgeous story, very well-written, great sensitive sex scenes. A real 5* favourite