All Comments on 'Women: Conniving, Scheming...'

I can tell immediately this story is full of fluff. Nah. I won't read anything by someone who has to use a ton of exposition to pad a story

AngelRider nailed it BTW. There is little here. I am convinced some writers submit long stories because they think length actually makes a work better. It doesn't unless the content is integral to the plot. So many stories here do not meet that requirement.

But I know, I haven't submitted anything. As if that means fuck all. There are tons of professional musicians without youtube channels. If they commented on a performance posted, would they be wrong in offering advice simply because they haven't created a channel?

This site is asinine

Sort of a Hallmark piece, but well written and a pleasure to read!

Boring. I quit reading after the first page. It might be a good story but the start was way too long. Should make it like a Reader's Digest condensed version.

Dear Boring above . . .

If you didn't like t, I suggest you choose another story. I don't like all the story I've written either. Choose something that had a hot rating.

Thanks for your comment. I do read and listen, and I try to avoid the same mistakes.

carvohi

Loved it, love found a way⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Excellent story its a shame they first marriage did not work out. I hate divorces.

I love a happy ending. Sometimes...Jim

An odd fairytale. Baby sisters pov narrative was quite a roller coaster ride. Was Vonda's track record a symptom of a pathology? Was she a hunting predator or a mendacious narcissist? Happiness comes to Del.