All Comments on 'Women Need Orgasms, Too'

This is one of the best stories I have ever read after years perusing this website. You have a gift, I wish this story was a whole book!

Good fun with an interesting premise. Loved it.

Great writing and excellent storytelling.

Your imagination is an absolute delight. Your character development is on, or better than, with the best on this site. Only 5*.

detroitdave

What a story! This one is one of the best Halloween stories I've ever read. Regarding the plot, a man with such erotic digital talents shouldn't be limited to just one woman.

Good luck in the contest.

Nothing wrong with proposing after 30 days...

we’ve been together for 35 years now.

I almost creamed my pants just reading. Could I please give the sixth star for a story?

I was taught how to please a woman, by an escort as well. Back when I was a teenager. I was 17, and Jojo was 38. My first older woman.. She was a neighbour of mine, and being a shy, and very awkward teenager, she caught me looking at her more than once.. She taught me things, that have stayed with me.. These days The closest I get to having sex, is masturbation, as old age took me from a good looking lad, to and ugly troll, and then added osteoarthritis to both legs..

The basic premise for the story was sufficient to carry it, and you handled it well. The added subplot of the swinger’s lifestyle and Shay having him screw two of her friends before their first time subtracted from what could have earned 5 stars from me. Know when to trust your basic plot and not have to layer on the smut. You’re a gifted story teller and I have a feeling you’ll have a number of Hall of Fame works before you’re done.

What a story. It's nice the upper class has such relaxed morals that allow David to pleasure all those women, can't say for sure if they were ladies, and allowed his mother to sleep her way into the family. Even with all the wall-to-wall sex, it was still an entertaining story with a very different twist. Well done!

Let me add my "voice" to the chorus singing your praises. If one were to give a clinic on how to write erotica, your stories would be part of it.

God bless you and keep you.

Paul

Perhaps the triplets deserve their own story?

I’m sure the Snyders had invited Shay to dine but I’m not sure they had invited I to dine. Maybe they invited me to dine.

Ergo: The Snyders had invited Shay and me to dine.

And this is how someone should write or do in order to make a virgin woman FEEL

Just so much fun!