All Comments on 'Women watching Woman (750 words)'

It’s sad in a way but feels true, a virtual commentary on the life of a stripper at a lower-class establishment, all in 750 words. Nice job.

I cheated and read this shortie out of order ;-)

Thank you for having two stories in my event! Much appreciated! This was very fun and concise, I was amused by "t'other" and such trickery. 750s are hard! But how was this EC and not Lesbian or E&V?

Re category: I suggested Non-Erotic, on the grounds that there's no actual lesbian sex and it's not really about getting off from E or V, but Laurel went for EC which is a pretty generic category. I'm not arguing - the story isn't completely unerotic.

5 stars

I like that you shows the stripper as a real person not just some sex toy with daddy issues.