by Ryswell
Very nice. Good pacing and character development, and I like that the protagonist is a decent enough chap w/o any outlandish characteristics that'd shatter the suspension of disbelief. As long as things stay "realistic" like this, I could see the story going on for quite some time as Wonder Woman slowly finds it harder and harder to fight in her mind.
What an amazing start to this series! So excited for more. Do you have a plan already as to how the story will unfold?