All Comments on 'Wonderland Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
loving the drama

this is brilliant, cant wait for the next one

green2ballsgreen2ballsabout 13 years ago
Love it.

I am waiting for the next chapter at the end of my seat, WOW OMG.Waiting will be so hard.

mikothebabymikothebabyabout 13 years ago
i just found this

and I am liking it a lot. I will be checking often for more chapters. Very good story line - has me on the edge of my seat.

VjaxVjaxabout 13 years ago
Very Nice

The story moves along well, an interesting take on the genre. A few to many "7 Foot Tall" uses, but aside from that a very easy read and well done. Looking forward to more.

sleeplessgurlsleeplessgurlalmost 13 years ago
Great story

I've read the first three chapters this weekend. It's a fabulous story, Lil. Looking forward to Talon and Tempest getting together. :)

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