All Comments on 'Wonderland Ch. 10'

I think you are an amazing writer, and this story is pretty well written. BUT, I hate thayt Thatcher knows Tempest so well and Talon is "supposedly" her life mate. I mean, we barely know anything about Talon!!! He's barely in the story!!! He's mmore like a supporting character then someone vBulletin we could actually see Tempest being with. If Tempest chooses Talon over Thatcher, I woul have a really hard time seeing cause she knows Thatcher soo much better than Talon. Sorry about my little rant and you're an amazing author

Excellent writing, great imagination and I am hoping that Talon gets his chance to really get to know Tempest, as Thrasher has. Yes, Talon should have told Tempest that he was leaving, since she is supposed to be his life-mate...maybe given her a choice of going with him and getting to know him. I am waiting patiently for the next chapter....as I have become addicted to your story!!!

I vote for Thatcher lol

You handled it so skillfully that I can't tell whose destiny Tempest will share, Talon's or Thatcher's.

An enthralling adventure!

Now, to await what the next chapter will bring.

I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter. The story gets more interesting with each sentence.

What an incredibly exciting story! I just read the story through from the beginning, and I am just blown away! I will be waiting on the edge of my seat for more. I love it! And I adore gargoyles!