All Comments on 'Wonton Lust'

by PoisonPen33

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XactoXactoabout 2 years ago

Not believable, but very entertaining! 😎 Thank you.

Kosova_guyKosova_guyabout 2 years ago

A visit to Emerald Pines is always the best. Great writing, fun creative story. Excellent job. Thanks for sharing.

PeytonMirabellePeytonMirabelleabout 2 years ago

Delightful and fun. I enjoyed that one quite a bit. Thanks for sharing!

ScottishTexanScottishTexanabout 2 years ago

It would have been perfect except for the Marijuana reference halfway through it. You could easily have left that out without hurting your narrative one single bit. 3/5

WillEPounderWillEPounderabout 2 years ago

Nice little fantasy. Loved the dialogue in particular.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow that was Hot! You have to love a flexible woman.

I thought the sheriff was going to want some too, lol

Good job, I can see why your score is higher than mine ;->

AZTT2AZTT2about 2 years ago

Great return to Emerald Pines

KumquatqueenKumquatqueenabout 2 years ago

Loved these characters and the restaurant! Great to see stories with a sense of humour. Will look for more of them.

BarryJames1952BarryJames1952about 2 years ago

Great story. Totally loved the characters. Now, I've gotta give you 5 stars and then find some Asian food.

OmenainenOmenainenabout 2 years ago

This was fun! I loved the peer support role play. And the food was so lovingly described that I want some now, too.

chastenchastenabout 2 years ago

A fun story, Poison. Of course, now I want some takeout!

EvaRampitEvaRampitover 1 year ago

So enjoyable! Fun, sexy, realistic, and funny.

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You ever have a friend who keeps saying, "you should write a sexy thriller" or "how about an erotic novella" or even "PORN! SIT DOWN AND GIVE US SOME PORN!" Well, I hope they're happy. I prefer longer stories with dialogue and personal connections for the sexy times. My le...