All Comments on 'Work Experience Whore'

This felt less finished than some of your other stories but I still really enjoyed it. I like your ideas.

So is it Rachel or Jessica that runs the brothel? You do not indicate she was taking a fake name, but the change takes place. Need to introduce that if that is the case.

Love the twist at the end

Good story. You're a good writer: the characters seem like genuine people. Feel like i'm learning about women just by reading. And, I loved the twist at the end, as well. Thank you.

Not as well written as your other story - lots of typos and errors. But a good tale, nontheless.