by HowlingWolfLady
Nice story so far, I hope there is at least a part 2 as you appear to have set up this story to be a multi part story.
I liked the story, but I wish it was in past tense. I think it would flow better that way.
I agree with VV. Using present tense in story telling is off - putting unless the story is actually taking place as it is told.
Yes, a nice romance between two coworkers.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.