All Comments on 'Working for Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Liked the story, I hope there is a part 2.

Nice story so far, I hope there is at least a part 2 as you appear to have set up this story to be a multi part story.

VoluptuousValkyrieVoluptuousValkyrieover 11 years ago

I liked the story, but I wish it was in past tense. I think it would flow better that way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Agree with VV

I agree with VV. Using present tense in story telling is off - putting unless the story is actually taking place as it is told.

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticalmost 7 years ago
Nice Romance

Yes, a nice romance between two coworkers.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

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