All Comments on 'Working Late'

Thank you for an excellent story that is what most of our

wives are doing...understand the bad women are all ex-wives

(tongue firmly in cheek).

I enjoyed it very much, thanks again....

As it's supposed to be...

This is a very good story. I usually avoid the Loving Wives tales unless the teaser hints that it's something like this. Thanks, Jack.

Thank you for this story.

great story as it should be .... keep it up

for writing good stories like this where no one gets belittled...

Write a few more, just to annoy the slut wife arseholes.

You left out the big-dicked studs, the humiliation, the degredation, the descriptions of small dicks, the circus clowns, the black-gang bang, the gallons of sperm, the stretched-out cunt, the best friend-boss-coworker-neighbor betrayal, the lesbian lover, the cum-sucker tattoos, the midget with the giant dick, the insincere "I love you" from the cheating spouse, the apparent huge turn-on to see another man fucking your wife.

I mean, all you have here is a story of an actual loving couple, who have been together for years, who do not need to cheat to enjoy their lives, who decide to continue to love, honor and cherish-forsaking all others for the rest of their lives. And do you know what?

It's freaking, absolutely, unbelievably AWESOME!!!!

I didn't think they would print good Loving Wife stories. Thank you for showing me different.

What can I say that the others have not already said. What a breath of fresh air. Thanks. 60 year old George

Hey, don't you have any idea how these stories supposed to go? Most writers just know that the wife is supposed to get angry, go to a bar, act like a total slut and humilate her husband to death with the effidence of a ganbang and the presence of a real man (not her husband) in her life.

How could you write about a loving understanding wife who knows that her husband does the best he can to maintain a nice life?

I think it's because there are yet some deasent writers left who believes that there is room for erotism en adventure within a healthy relation between spouses. And that that can give the makings of a nice story. For that to you my hat off.

Mr. Straw - great work - sensual marital erotica as it can be written by an author who has the ability. More Please!!

Nice Theme - Thanks and Regards

can be out of this world when both work at it...and it's great to read erotica when both are working at it hard!!! :)

more please!

There is nothing more to add to what others have said. This is sensual & erotic for me. Boy I wish I was surprised like that also...

*have to work extra hours*-----LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved it, nothing tops a sexy, romantic story. I especially liked how Susie took matters into her own hands, and made their anniversary something to remember fondly. Great story!

I loved it, nothing tops a sexy, romantic story. I especially liked how Susie took matters into her own hands, and made their anniversary something to remember fondly. Great story!

Married Lust is not erotic!

Wow, what a wife to take control and have a big big evening. What a babe she is. He can be so happy with her. So refreashing this story is. Still is hope for more true stories like this one. Thanks a lot for your fine story.

Simply put, this was a great story. One of the best stories i have read since i have been reading on here. Instead of the wife getting mad and going out and being a complete slut, she understands her husbands situation and realizes that her husband is just as upset as she is about the situation. I applaud her for taking matters into her own hands. Bravo.Keep up the great writing and i will be looking to future stories from you.

smart concept and using your brain,thank for giving us a good story.

The story was short but great. It met the true loving wives story and shows that conflict isn't always there.

just discovered the married sexis not erotic comment. i expect to see your story of cheating wives eventually. if you take that attitude and are married, your wife is going to be looking. if you are married, even for many years call her from work tomorrow, tell her your cocvk is stiff and dripping thinking og fucking her wonderful cun..talk about fucking, she has probably had enough love making. tell her you are going to eat her cunt until she comnes then pound your ciock and hot cum into, let her make yopu hard again and have her suck you. ill bet she will be ready and hot at night and youll find all kinds of married eroticism.

This is the best story i have ever read. This is a loving wife story. She understood the situation and took matters into her own hands, but she didn't do it buy going out and fucking some other guy.She went to her husbands place of employment and celebrated there with him. I could only wish that i will be lucky enough to find a woman like her. Someone that loves you so much, as this woman did her husband. Hope you write more stories like this. Like others have said i don't read loving wife stories much because i hate wimpy,sick,cuckold stories.As soon as there is an indication that the story is a cuckold story i skip to the end to see if there is some twist, if not i don't bother reading the rest.If there is some kind of revenge than i go back and read the rest.Anyways keep up the good work.

What a novel idea! Hot sex and love even between man and wife. Awesome!

What more can i say. The only thing i can say is that, i hope that i am lucky enough to find myself a woman like her.

I agree with many of the comments: this is what Loving Wives should be about.

This may be a startling revelation for some: a husband and wife could actually love and respect each other and find all that they need in their shared love.

Regards, Jack

Excellent loving wife story. Thanks, jack_straw.

Now that is one smart woman that knows what she wants and how to get it. She definately knows her way around an office, using every resource and asset at her disposal to accomplish her goals. She's intelligent, talented, innovative, experienced and dresses for success which equals one lucky husband. This team will go far. Very enjoyable read, Thanks Jack

one of the few true loving wife stories ive seen on literotica

I would LOVE to do this for my husband. I am a little bit more outgoing sexually than he is, but there is no reason you can't make sex between a husband and wife dirty once in awhile. I am all about making love, but a wife can definitely make her husband's dirty fantasy happen with her and not five other girls. Not all husbands need to have six of his wifes friends to keep the love life alive. It stays alive with just a little effort like she showed in this story. Use your imagination and the possiblities are limitless! I know I am looking foward to many years of kinky sex with JUST my husband. I love thinking of new ways to surprise him. Keep up the realistic, sexual good work!

Most women would have just bitched at her husband for trying to do his job and making a life for them, but she knows that her husband would be with her if he could. That's what so good about this story, she took the task of making her husband know she will do what ever it takes to make him happy. Thanks for this refreshingly good story....Rich

A very DG Hearish story, uplifting but very sexy. Certainly proves the point that a story doesn't have to be 10 pages to be good.

This was a TWL story and with only 3 favorites. Oop's I know why, she wasn't a whore/slut wife that fucked half of Texas because he had to work. Instead she took the party to him..........hummm what a concept........"A Faithful Wife".

Boy that Spillberg is something.

Was Jack suggesting, in his last larger paragraph, that Susie might have gone out to find someone else to fuck? Not this wife and not her husband either!

Enjoyed the read and the story line. Took a bad situation and made it work.

For story of romantic love and lust of a husband and wife for each other! A loving wife and equally loving husband. Refreshing!

Great concept well delivered faithful love is the most erotic and pleasing with the one you love and you have a commitment. Very well done...Thank you Jack Straw.

Finally - a real Loving Wife Story - at least as I define the phrase

Nice job Jack

5*

All of 1* !!

You really got me with this story. I expected the wife to go out and pick-up some mindless cheater to get even with her husband for working. Boy, was I pleasantly surprised when she made the best of a disappointing cancellation. This is a woman who truly Loved her husband. She made all the right decisions. It is refreshing to read about a woman who is not stupid and makes the correct decisions. Thank you!

But if he could see the light at the end of the tunnel he should have put his wife off for the few minutes needed to complete the project, then he could have given her his undivided attention for the rest of the evening and into the next morning. Well played.

What's to say! It's short and sweet WOOF ★★★★★

So nice to read a story about a spouse understanding and coming together to make a difficult situation better. Much more uplifting than the pissed off spouse cheating scenario we see so often!

And again I write:

Amen!

Excellent

That's not the way that LW wives usually act when they're pissed at hubby. Enjoyed it.

Who didn't end up with her head up someone else's ass or vice versa. Good little flash story about making the right decision. Signed: BTW

Awesome story! I love 💘 her solution!

Really good story about a real loving wife and her husband. Was not expecting that.

Love the story. Love that he seemed to keep his black dress socks on as he fucked her.

Happy anniversary!

Excellent story, so refreshing to read about a couple making the right decisions!!!

No way he takes her back. 1 *

IF ONLY MORE WIVES/HUSBANDS DID THIS WHEN THEIR PARTNERS ARE WORKING LATE INSTEAD OF RUNNING TO A PUB TO FLIRT AND PICK UP OTHERS

Loved it.

5/5

So many marriages would be turned into happiest marriages rather thN divorces and pain if this mantra were to be followed.

Well written.

A brilliant loving wife. And yes readers, it really is that simple sometimes. If you love each other instead of letting stuff fester, "DO" something that reminds the other person why you were meant to be together. 5/5

Is this a story about a loving wife in the loving wives section? Outrageous! Please send more! That was lovely.

Absolutely delightful. Thank you for this.

Susie Dalton is a fine woman to come to her husbands office and fuck his brains out and let him cum all over her face while he tries to finish his project to make his boss happy. A good woman is hard to find and Susie is the one to fulfill her hubbies needs.

Very uplifting.

I loved it most women think men have fantasies about groups of women all over them. Most the time of the biggest fantasy is with their wife doing something like this.

Wonderful.