All Comments on 'Working Off His Debt'

All in all, a pretty good story as far as it went. Needs following chapter(s) to flesh it out. Also needs to have Gary fuck his daughter to make it compatible with this incest category . . . .

And I liked it. Right up my ally

Wife and daughter betrayal

it was a good story i liked it..It sounded like a sub-plot from a mobbster movie that they would use as comic relief directly before or after something dramatic...lol

Well what's his life worth? Nothing now, he may as well kill himself or better kill the punk Tommy, and go to jail for the murder, that way he would be away from his slut whore wife.It wouldn't be too bad to kick the shit out of her, along with his daughter, Just enough to put them in the hospital for a while.