All Comments on 'Working Out Issues Ch. 04'
by blake1
- 8 Comments
Anonymousabout 5 years agoThis story is so fun and weirdly erotic. I have no idea where it’s going and I love that. I can wait to read more
GundamXDabout 5 years agoThe first line of every chapter makes me laugh lol. It’s so weird reading this story, like the cute and adorable parts make you go aww, but the erotic parts are like yasss lol. This right here is innocent erotica, and I love it haha!
300bowler300about 5 years agoTHIS STORY IS SO WONDERFUL, IT LETS YOUR MIND WONDER IN A 1,000 DIFFERENT DIRECTIONS, AS TO WHAT IS COMING NEXT, AND WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN BETWEEN THE TWO WOULD BE LOVERS...BETTY jo xoxo
mumblegooseeggabout 5 years agoI really like how slowly this is moving, little by little,Mel not suspecting what is happening to him -- we readers of course having the help of the story category. Although Mel is maybe depicted as a tiny bit over-naive? I mean those kisses on the mouth that are getting increasingly passionate, "just jokes"?? Or is he in severe denial? And what about Adam? He surely must be more conscious of the reality of their relationship? Is there a possibility of revealing what Adam actually feels"? Don't introduce that if you think it compromises the narrative!
I can't wait for the next chapter. I guess I'm just a sucker for a romantic story, whether m-f, m-m, f-f or even mtf-ftm.
SubtleDeviancealmost 5 years agoWhen I first started writing on this site, I wanted to write stories that move slowly like this. But after the first chapter I got bad ratings and reviews, got discouraged and sped up the action... Since then my stories have been pretty straight to the point. This makes me want to write a slower moving, sweet type of stories, maybe even a bromance thing... Good stuff... And it's hularious!
DianeRedfernover 4 years agoGreat saga continues and keeps getting better and subtly hotter, How talented you are! You're really hitting my G-spot, slowly and lovingly, just the way I love it.
xoxo,
Di
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