by Mynameissteven
Are you going to continue this story further or not? If not its an awesome short story that could have a little more build up instead of getting to it right away. It helps if given a description of other characters and sex scenes.
Please stop writing. You keep using the same formula and it's tiring. This isn't the career for you.
stop writing or at least think before you continue.
they did all that in a public gym.
switch to a home gym and its believable.
Oh you can't leave things hanging now !! Yes, they must finish what they started at home and really screw each other hard & slow etc.
Hot & arousing ..... cannot wait for more. Thank you.
fucking step milf is always curious and that to in yoga pants lucky guy.
There is more creativity in this story than you could put into your one line comments.
So anonymous please stop writing you are boring the fuck out of everyone with your poor efforts at trolling.
This is either written by a twelve year old or someone with a very poor grasp of the English language.
It was hot as fuck... but then I was thinking wait this is a public gym , u can't even get in without at least one other person who actually opened the gym.... unless it's a hotel gym ,that means they are on a vacation together... all in all nice story but must be improved. ...