by es_larsson
Thank you for such a hot and exciting story .. I can see myself ending up in Erica's position at that age :) .. please continue her story .. TG Tiffany
This is the best story I've read in a while! I cannot wait to read more! please, please please continue to share the next chapters with us XOXO - Sammi
It's a really good story, with great imagery. The reader can almost imagine themselves in that position. I hope there's a part two.
This is so sexy. Imagining being in this position got me really worked up. I hope there will be more.
I loved it! Great story, very descriptive! It made me want to be in Eric's shoes...his locked shoes, I can't wait to read part 2.
I love how you write the thirsty slut within escaping from the reluctant girly boy on the surface.