by Reardensteel57
Good premise.
But the sex is MUCH too rushed.
Needed some preliminaries/foreplay before her mouth gobbled his cock.
Nothing with her tits? Why? Nothing with her ass? Why?
Three stars.
Hot Hard & Fast, the way it has to be sometimes. Five stars, hope you continue it.
Wow…what a sexplot….and a sexpot! The intensity…wow..what a read!
Thanks for that…can I ever find a situation like that for me..what a rush!
OK, it's well written, but you can't use on sentence as tag-bait. I'm here for the pregnancy tag and am sorely disappointed.