All Comments on 'Works Night Out'

by StrawberryThief

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
pathetic

I don't know if there is a category for this kind of characters

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Umbra_EllaUmbra_Ellaalmost 7 years ago
Awesome

I don't see a lot of FemDom Non-Con - loved it!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Too public for my taste

Nice one, pretty good dominating, really hot. The only thing I don't like would be the public part. Put I'd read part 2 definetly

CornixCornixabout 3 years ago
#metoo leads to him too

Thank you.

Yes I concur with another person so little Femdom noncon so wonderful to read some.

Some might complain about the piblic side, or the lack of realism...that is why it is fiction. So toy as an author can take us on a ride theough the impossible. For that I thank you.

Suzy did seem to disappear part way through. Don't know if that was intentional or simply not noticed. I am an inexperienced writer so tend not to be able to have roo many characters in any stories I write. I would suggest if not going to play a part don't introduce them but it is your story and do as you wish.

Thank you again, I enjoyed reading it thoroughly.

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